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Review:Melliex says:
Hey, sorry about the wait, Melliex here from the forum with yor review.

The story itself seems very interesting, I can't quite see where it may go at the moment but I really like your OC, she seems very relaxed and very inward; like she deals with things by herself and tends to be very selfconious, I feel I could relate to her and that's a really special connection between reader and character that's hard to achieve so well done one that!

I also like how you've got the POV changing it just sort of freshens up the story and tends to stop it from droneng on... if you get me?

Scorpious seems to be... like Draco but miniture but perhaprs a little more relaxed (Draco would never have picked up say... Hermione's book for her) and your characterization of him seems to be really good in my (humble) opinion.

Overall a very nice first chapter to what seems to be a very nice story about people realising things they never knew they would.

Well done, Melliex

Author's Response: Hey, it's no problem! I really appreciate the review. I understand everything you're saying. I kind of wanted him to be like Draco but more relaxed--you said it perfectly! Draco also wouldn't have been friends with Harry and Ron, but Scorpius is friends with their children. Someone is needing to launder their Karma :P

Thanks for the review!


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