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Review:Olwyn says:
Hi, I'm so sorry it took forever to get thru the list. I had a 20 chapter thing and an 8 chapter thing and blah blah blah excuses.

I really like this, it's not too traditional. I love any fic where the female lead becomes empowered or whatever. The fact that Rose can finally get over Scorpius is great.

I find it a bit unbelievable that Rose wouldn't be able to move on for nine years, considering that she has a very fast turnaround into a very strong, self empowered woman. I feel like she would try more to move on, and keep thinking that she succeeded, only to not.

The sugar quills are a great symbol, I love that you included that in the ending.

In the beginning, I find it crazy that Rose waits for Scorpius for 45 minutes, and he never apologizes for that. Not really, anyway. Personally, if I was her, I would be ready to leave after 10. But then, I'm very impatient. If this is her character flaw, loving Scorpius too much, try playing that up!

Well, I have to go to the orthodontist now, but I would be wrapping up even if I didn't have to go.

I really like the whole base of this, you've done so well.
-Olwyn
PS I love the way it highlights the breakup rather than the relationship.

10/10

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