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Review:redherring says:
Oooh a nice cliffhanger there! A very spine-chilling image. I'm really loving following the mystery of all this - I'm usually not a fan of mystery fanfics as they can be hard to do well, but you really pull it off.

I think I've said this before, but the world you've created is really, really brilliant. LUMOS and all that, it's really interesting and original, but always really believable as well.

I also love your Draco. He's canon-esque and suitably anti-hero while being rather appealing at the same time xD I loved the comments about Narcissa, they were wonderfully Draco: That one his mother taught him. She's a fine woman.

Great chapter, as always. And YAY there's another one :D Off I go...

Author's Response: Thank you! I usually try to put a little bit of mystery in my fics but this is my first time writing a story where the mystery is really the focus.

It took my a few minutes to think of that, LUMOS :P

Who doesn't love Draco? But honestly I feel like knowing the kind of character I'm trying to write- The Phillip Marlowe, the Sam Spade, you know- and also having Draco's characterization to work with gives me so much to write. I definitely didn't want to do this with an OC.

Thank you!!!


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