Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:You Know Who says:
Lovely banner I must first say. Splendid work the DA can whip up.
Your narration reminds me of those radio murder mysteries. The blokes with the deep voice, wide vocabulary, enjoys shorts sentences to build up the suspense.

Not a bad start

Some of the murders, reminds me of Agatha Christe and Edgar Allan Poe, great inspiration for what you want to help you with this. The dark, grim atmosphere, the feeling of hopelessness. You would want to try to get that for a mood.

You have a strong prequel, it's like the opening credits for a paranormal tv series. Just a few grammar problems here, and it's good to let a friends triple-check that. You also have a few tense changes in the beginning and end.

7.5/10 Not a bad start, is this your first?

Author's Response: Nah, it's not my first. Read my other fics one day if you get the chance!

I never read the Agatha Christe or Poe stories before, but I think I might sometime soon. Thanks for reading, and I'll be sure to have someone look it over again for mistakes!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Submit Report:  





All stories remain the property of their authors and must not be copied in any form without their consent. This is an unofficial, not for profit site, and is in no way connected with J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books or Bloomsbury Publishing or Warner Bros. It is not endorsed by any of the aforementioned parties. Rights to characters and their images is neither claimed nor implied. The use of photographs and/or the likeness of any person contained herein does not imply endorsement of any kind. Any depictions were obtained through publically available sources and therefore fall under fair use. Although we may provide links to other websites, we are not responsible for any material at these sites. You acknowledge that you link to these other websites at your own risk. All original administrative content is copyright of the site owner and must not be copied in any form (electronic or otherwise) without the prior consent of the siteowner. ©2000-2012 Fanfictionworld.net

[terms of service] [report abuse] [privacy policy] [site credits]
 
 

navigation

home

search HPFF
read stories
write stories
login/register
get help
site links
forums
podcasts
Terms of Service
Site Rules
contact us

  
 
 

categories & genres

Genre:
- crossover
- drama
- fluff
- general
- horror/dark
- humor
- mystery
- romance
- action/adventure
- angst
- au
- young adult

Popular Pairings:
- harry/ginny
- ron/hermione
- james/lily
- draco/hermione
- more...

Format:
- one-shot
- short story
- novella
- novel
- short story collection
- songfic

  
 
 

quick links

my account
ToS
random story
site rules
help
merchandise


  
 
 

fanfictionworld.net