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Review:rozen_maiden says:
Fantastic ending! You've really captured the inner evil and manipulative spirit of Tom, yet you've almost made him a likable character. I loved it!
There was a lot of dialogue, but it seemed to really fit into the story. Sometimes dialogue can become too much, but this was honeslty really good, and I really enjoyed the character interaction.
Also, you beginning immdiately pulled me into it. The part where he started alking to the Grey Lady was really fantastic work. You made both cahracters stand out.
Excellent one-shot! I hope it was a ice break from writing your epic series ^_^ Hope you're going all right, and I hope I hear from you soon!
Mahalia xx

Author's Response: OH THANK YOU SO MUCH Mahliah!!! :) i was so worried about the dialog, I have a bad habit of putting to much of it in my one shots, this one however was a story based purely on dialog pretty much!! Thanks!!! :) Im was also really worried about hitting Tom Riddle, i kinda wanted to make him seem semi likable because yes this story was to show is charm and likable side because thats how he got what he wanted all threw his teenage years!! I honestly dont know how many times i read the Gray Lady part with Harry in DH and how many times i watched the Tom Riddle and Slughorn parts in HBP to get this right, and it feels great hearing that i got it right!! :)

It was a nice break, i have another one shot for a challenge in the queue then i will be posting chapter six in my series and i have gotten an amazing beta so hopefully it will start clearing up alot!! :) Im so happy you found the time to read this story talk to you soon!!

Jess


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