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Review:lia_2390 says:
*facepalm* Oh Freddy...why? Whyy? Honestly, my jaw dropped, and I sat here for a while sputtering. How on earth is she going to get herself out of this one? The more she pushes him away now, the more agonising it will feel. And what about Remus? Is she somehow caught in between? And poor Healer Crane :( oh dear.

I found that Freddy had much more edge in this chapter compared to all the others, especially when she's with Oliver. It's like she's getting back her spunk now...she's much more alive and her relationship with Remus brings this out even more. I really like that.

Her awkwardness with the personal displays of affection kind of reminds me of myself and I laughed a bit when I read that. Cecilia is a great character too, she's the perfect match for Lias. Ellen Page was a good choice.

I really can't wait to read chapter 12 now...things have definitely gotten interesting!

Lia

Author's Response: Hello Lia,
Thank you so much for the wonderful review! As always, it was just great hearing from you. I truly appreciate all of your comments and kind, thoughtful feedback. You're such a supportive reader. Again, thank you!

Haha, yeah, Freddy is definitely not the smartest witch out there. Well, I suppose she is rather intellectual, being a Hogwarts professor and all, but she really doesn't have much common sense. I do think she has this tendency to just dig herself deeper and deeper and then only realizes that she's made a mistake at the very last minute, hehe.

And I'm so glad you thought she had more spunk in this chapter. She's certainly not as sick as she was before and while her renewed zest for life is definitely a good thing, it will also bring some problems with it later on down the road.

Once more, thank you for the awesome review! The next chapter is in the works and should be posted soon. ^_^ I hope you have a great week! Take care!

Best,
Lee Anne


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