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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Hello! This is TenthWeasleyWriter from the forums with your review. =)

This is a very original one-shot, and I've never read anything quite like it before! It's shorter than I expected, but in a good way, if that makes sense. I think any longer, and it would have felt dragged out.

I really got the sense of the narrator's pain, but it confused me at first from whose point of view the story was. Once I reached the end, I had to re-read it, and then it made much more sense. =) Your descriptions were lovely and obviously well thought-out.

The only typo I found was in this line: "...his zealot attitude towards everything in his life..." I think you meant 'zealous' instead of 'zealot'? That's the way I read it, at least. ^^

Very well done, you write very nicely! I hope you do well in your challenge!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review; and thanks for pointing out the typo. I appericiate the critical eye of the reader.

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