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Review:schoenemaedchen says:
Hello there...

So this review is painfully over due, but better late than never!

So I really do enjoy Weasley stories, just generally, but I especially love when people delve into the Molly/Arthur era just when they were starting out.

Your story is warm, gives the reader a good picture of what happened then, and I think leaves the reader really satisfied at the end.

Characterization was well done, and the plot was plausible and realistic for the age.

I thought the flow was a bit choppy at times. I felt sometimes it was a little bit too much information in some scenes, and that perhaps some scenes could be extended with detail instead. Just my personal feeling, though.

Otherwise, I wanted to mention one word--"acceptation" You mean, Gideon "accepting" his Mother's letter...

Actually, it isn't a word, I think you were looking for "acceptance" and perhaps thinking of expectation at the same time or something. It happens, thought I would just let you know!

Really, overall a great story to read. It is always so great to read a story that is a bit different and with these not-so-common characters.

Take care!!
-schoenemaedchen

Author's Response: Thank you very much for this review and for your correction; I will definitly get to it as I now understand what the mistake behind it!!

Thanks again, I really appreciate it!


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