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Review:MajiKat says:
loved it!!
louis rules!

not much to say Jack - the characters are all fabulously written - love the crazy!beautiful girls (think i missed an adjective there) once more.

do you have sisters?? close female cousins/friends? cause you do such a good job with those characters!!

i like the 2 plots you have going here - we have the romantic plot, which i am thinking is the main one, and the other political plot, which i find intriguing. i like the way you reveal what your characters do etc. it flows wonderfully and feels very natural.

i could be watching a tv show. each chap like an episode.
might read ch 3 now xD


Author's Response: He's pretty much the best isn't he?

Ahh there might be an extra adjective in there, can never really remember though. It's really the thought that counts with them, know who you're talking about pretty quickly and all that.

Have a younger sister who's fair awesome. Really though, I was raised by teenaged girls, I've got them worked out better than most people :P

Pretty much exactly! The romantic plot is to the forefront, largely because Dom and the others keep him somewhat isolated from the political side of things. He's involved, but mainly from the periphery, so he sees how things are shaped, but can't really get involved.

Would make an AWESOME tv show! I would be good at that actually :P Haha thanks again for reviewing!

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