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Review:SJ says:
Yay! An update! And I'm sorry my review is so late. I've been tracking this story everyday during the holidays, but this week I was too busy and of course there was an update. This story is my new obsession! I caught myself smiling through this whole chapter.

I can't tell you enough how I love your Fleur and Bill (or Mr. Weezlee. Hee) In the books, we saw Fleur sometimes being haughty and opinionated, but I love this story because we see the other side that I love about her: she isn't afraid of challenges. I like that you gave her a janitorial job. I have a feeling she's going to tackle it as a true Triwizard champion. And the balance between her personality and Bill's? Perfect.

Regarding the new characters of James and Emmeline? They're great! I cannot wait to see more of them. I love, love how Fleur noticed her red pumps right away. But I think in her rubber boots she wins hands down. And I think Bill thinks so too! So thanks for a great update! Looking forward to seeing how Fleur and Bill become Fleur&Bill. Lovely!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry, I'm so late in replying, anyway! I posted it in the queue, but it got rejected, so that's why the wait was longer. I'm so glad you like this enough to follow it. I'm so happy you like it and hope you will like the rest :)

I'm so glad that people like my characterization of them. I know, I just always thought there was a different side to her. I think it would have been unrealistic if everything fell at her feet, hence the janitorial job and not the position she'd wanted. I want to write them so readers can see how different they are, yet in a way that you can see their true personalities and why they would like each other.

I'm so glad you like them! There will be much more of them. It was such a girl thing of her to do, but girls are perceptive towards that sort of thing - or at least, I know I am. Haha, I would pick the red shoes. Oh, Bill definitely thinks so. No, thank you for reading! I'm excited to get this moving along. Thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate your encouragement!

Amandax


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