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Review:libby103 says:
Hey there! It's Liberty from my review thread on the forums!
Sorry it took me a bit to get to reviewing your piece.

First off, I'd just like to compliment your plot. It's definitely enthralling...I've gobbled it all up and read all 10 available chapters already...

Anyways, let's just talk about this specific chapter.

The intro to this chapter is wonderful, I love how simple it is while bringing the reader in.

I know nothing about TB, so I was afraid that this story wouldn't be my cup of tea. However, I'm finding this story's raw plot enhanced by the TB and Freddy's character is greatly enhanced as well.

I really like Freddy's character, she's hasn't really shown much of it in this chapter, but we learn a lot about how trapped she feels in this chapter and how much of a world traveler she is.

Dr. Crane's character isn't really developed at all here, besides the fact that he's a very successful, handsome bachelor of a doctor. I love how there's that little hint that he has a little something going on for Freddy, it makes the outright realization in later chapters feel like an epiphany. The fact that he comes off as a normal doctor with normal small talk in this chapter makes it even more stupendous.

I really don't have any criticism here. This chapter's plot isn't nearly as wonderful as later ones, I will admit, but before I read the whole thing, I thought it completely amazing.

from,
Liberty (Libby103)

Author's Response: Hello Liberty,
Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm so thrilled to hear that you enjoyed this story and were intrigued enough by the plot to continue reading it all the way through. I know the pacing of this fic is very slow, and because most of the conflict is internal as opposed to external, I really wasn't sure if readers would find it interesting. Needless to say, I'm so happy that you liked this first chapter. ^_^

And I was truly pleased to hear that you liked my OCs. Although canon characters do have significant roles in this fic, I think this story is mostly OC-driven. And yes, Crane isn't a very obvious character. He certainly doesn't wear his emotions on his sleeve. ;)

Again, thanks so much for the wonderful comments! It was great hearing from you. I hope you have a pleasant week. ^_^ Take care and be well!

Best,
celticbard


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