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Review:BKL8008 says:
Very well done with excellent character captures. I think it's a perfect summary of what would have happened the night that Sirius was thrown out of his home. The only problem was that there are a few missing words here and there, and it's not clear what James 'snatched' near the end. Other than that, great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you thought I did the characters well, I was really worried because I've never written in the point of view of a guy, much less the view of James. I'm also uber glad you liked my version of why Sirius left. I didn't like the idea that Sirius just left, I felt he needed something really big to happen first. And I reread the part about "snatching" and I realized I forgot a word. James was meant to snatch Sirius's bag before Sirius so he could make Sirius sleep in James's bed. Thanks so much for the wonderful first review!

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