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Review:lily16 says:
Wow, that was a lot more dramatic than the other chapters. I think you wrote everyone's reactions to Snape's worst memory really well. I especially like how you used James' reaction to show how much Lily means to him now.

Hehe speaking of James, did he seriously consider cutting his ear off for a minute? He's so adorable, and his original note was so corny :) In a nice way, of course.

Oh and I LOVED that last scene when Lily ripped up the flower and then felt guilty about it. That's exactly how I imagined her...she's fair and kind, even when she's angry.

Author's Response: Yes, Snape's worst memory is not a happy event and I just couldn't write humour here. It was a turning point for James and Lily's lives. James' true character is starting to really come through here. :)

And no, he didn't consider it for a second. xD He just likes to be a drama queen sometimes. ;) He is also a wee bit corny, but in his own sweet unique way. :)

And yes... I had this scene with Lily and the flower in mind ever since I started planning the story. Lily is a sweetheart, she is just put off by James' childish behaviour sometimes (and let's face it, who wouldn't?)

I am really happy you liked the scene and the story and thank you for all the wonderful reviews that you left me. ;)

Have an amazing day,
Kail


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