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Review:LovelyMioneWeasley says:
Sorry to hear about your whopping caugh! But I couldn't help but laugh because the same kind of irony occurs in my life every day so I completely understand ^_^

Healer Crane is just getting . . . annoying for me right about now. Hahaha. He is so good. You have done such an excellent job with him; I love the moment where he realized he got cuaght by Freddy. A well devloped moment and a funny moment all in the same. Well done.

Freddy's fleeting thoughts toward Remus and the general company of loneliness were probably some of my favorite thoughts and sentences thus far of your story. My favorite line was the one below:

"She had never been one for company, although now loneliness had become an entirely different entity, something that was dark and hungry and relentless."

Oh the group of women . . . here in the South, the equivalent is a "bless their hearts." Really, the proper treatment would be a resounding head smack and a proper telling of them to "get on with their lives." Well done though and Naomi Watts is a perfect visual aide to play and act as Lavinia in my mind. I highly approve. Most of all, I enjoyed the walk between Crane, Freddy, and Lavinia-- an excellent usage of character building.

The pacing is picking up which can only mean that the story shall be picking up as well. I approve of all of the above and please give some extra cookies to your betas because they are doing an excellent job. You have a wonderful story and please come back and request some more reviews because I'd love to read more if you would like.

9/10
Lindsey

Author's Response: Hi Lindsey!
Gah! I feel so speechless after reading all your lovely reviews. Really, I can't thank you enough. You've been such a fantastic, supportive reviewer. ^_^ I will definitely re-request from you in the future, if that's all right.

Yeah, talk about irony! The whooping cough spell was a year ago, but I remember it like it was yesterday. I will say one thing, though. While I was coughing my head off, I more or less realized why poor Freddy is so grouchy all the time. Respiratory illnesses are no fun.

I'm so glad you're still enjoying my characterization of Crane. And yes, he is extremely annoying, especially considering he has a habit of showing up exactly when and where he is not wanted.

I'm also happy to hear that you enjoyed the solarium women. You're right, they definitely do need to be smacked upside the head.

I hope you forgive me for gushing, but your reviews were just wonderful. I loved each and every one of them. Thank you SO much, Lindsey!

Best,
celticbard


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