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Review:StepUpx_Gryffindor says:
" Angelina flew to the space beside Alicia. "It's that girl he was stalking, right?"

"I was not stalking her," he muttered.

The girls dissolved into a fit of giggles, though he didn't know what was so funny. "No need to be so negative," said Alicia. "Not this, not that." "



I thought this part was completely adorable. I love that all the girls gang up on him like a big brother! Especially because Oliver gets so flustered XD


" Now this was a bloke who knew what he was talking about. "What is it about girls that make you feel like you're in the wrong even when you're not?" muttered Oliver.

Jeremy laughed once, tired and resigned. "I have no bleedin' idea, but I really wish they'd let us in on the secret."

Oliver continued the sour swell of the conversation, desperate to purge everything from his system. "Bet they don't even know how easy it is to guilt us."

"They'd exploit it to bits if they did."

"Foxes, all of them."

"Never know what they want."

"Can't accept we're trying to be gentlemen."

"And never see how much we care." "



You must have known I'd comment on this bromance right here. Why am I so addicted to your male leads? It's becoming an obsession. I want... everyone.




OH, SOD. HE RAN LIKE MICHAEL VARTAN FROM NEVER BEEN KISSED. HE'S RUNNING AFTER DREW BARRYMORE. The fangirl in me right now... I can't even...

Author's Response: This is sooo my favorite chapter~ I love writing about their respective Quidditch teams, because that's all they do really :D Banter about their captains and whatnot. And we all know Oliver's track record with gaggles of girls: he never wins.

BROMANCE! It is perfectly normal to want everyone. That's the most common reaction, actually. I mean, one of them is like mmm, but two of them. *My*.

OMG I'VE WATCHED THAT and it's so cliche but I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN I GOT CAUGHT UP IN IT TOO HENCE MY CAPS~


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