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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
BUSTED. I quite enjoyed this chapter just as much as the first; really quite comic the way Albus just steamrolls over Scorpius with wit and fast reactions when Scorpius starts blabbing on about how Albus can't tell him what to do. Those two really are quite the pair. I bet they end up enjoying working together when this is all over. And I'm looking forward to how they explain themselves to the girl as to why they were 'spying' on her. Great chapter! :) 10/10

Author's Response: Haha, thank you very much! :D It's definitely going to take them a long time to realize that they do actually compliment each other well - they're both too childish to see it just yet. I'm really glad to be getting the humour right in this story - it's surprising how easily Albus's quick wit rolls off the fingers. ;)

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It's wonderful to hear from you! ^_^

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