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Review:gingersnape says:
Hello again, gingersnape with your requested review here!

Plot: Ooh, it is thickening and I really like how Healer Crane keeps showing a little more emotion towards Freddy and every time it's a little stranger and we get more information on him! I don't have any CC on that (or characterizations for that matter) but I will say that you've really sparked my interest in it.

I love how you described the solarium, as well as the rest of the building, It had that perfect mix of old fashioned and slightly strange that fit Freddy's emotions very well.

As for characterizations, I'll just have a few paragraphs on the solarium women rather than structure it since they are all a group right now.

The solarium women are so cute, with their gossiping and curiosity, It really adds a bit of humor to such a dreadful situation for Freddy, and I loved hearing about how Freddy's a favorite. Her emotions were spot on and Lavinia offering to walk back with them was the cherry on top!

Again, no need for spelling/grammar and pacing/flow because it's amazing. I could put them in, but it might be a bit repetitive for every chapter to have that.

I really enjoyed this, and would be happy to continue if you're interested!
-ginger

Author's Response: Hi gingersnape!
Thank you so much for the kind and thoughtful review! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that you are still enjoying this fic. And, as always, I am truly grateful for all your comments. They have all been so helpful.

Yes, Crane is definitely starting to show some more interest in Freddy. He's sort of an awkward guy, not very good with women despite being rather popular with them. ;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the description of the solarium. I based most of it on images of actual solariums in TB sanatoriums in the 30s and 40s. They were rather odd looking places. In most cases, patients were lined up on lounge chairs facing great big windows. Back then, before antibiotics were used to cure TB, the doctors believed that sunlight and fresh air were the best treatments for the disease. Therefore, I thought Freddy's sanatorium should be appropriately outfitted with a solarium of its own. ^_^

Haha, yes, I guess the women were cute in their own way, although I'm sure Freddy found them annoying. She's not the most social person and being around gossips does make her uncomfortable.

Again, I am so thrilled that this story interested you and that you liked what you read. I will definitely drop by your queue soon and re-request for the next chapters. Until then, take care and be well!

Best,
celticbard


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