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Review:Singularity says:
lol, this was hilarious! I love Lily's line:

"But they are dancing! They look as if a rainbow vomited on them!"

Excellent :p The conversation with the marauders at the beginning was fun too. I was a little disappointed that Peter wasn't involved, but I did love the way you wrote Remus. And Lames...haha :)

See, this seems like the James Potter from the books...arrogant, flashy, but with an undertone of sweetness.

Author's Response: Have I thanked you for the wonderful reviews? I think not, so thank you so much! :)))

And yes, this is one of the more humourous chapters, but I am glad how it came out. Peter... I try to include him here and there in conversations, but I just cannot imagine him having a large role in this situations. Maybe if I edit for mistakes, I'll write several more lines with him (I am throwing him a bone here :D ).

And finally - I am glad that you see James close to the ones in books. As you can see, this story generally thrives on characterisation and not on plot, so I've really tried to look deep inside the characters and write them as the people that are supposed to be. :)

Once again, thanks for the wonderful reviews! :) Have a nice day!

Harley


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