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Review:Singularity says:
Hello again :) This story continues to be really great. I loved the little bit with Professor Sprout. She seemed exactly how I would imagine her: sweet, helpful, but still gives James a detention :)

I also really liked the scene between James and Sirius. The

"Sirius snickered at his favourite (grossly overused) pun."

line made me laugh out loud. That is one of those puns that seems to be used in a good portion of marauder's era fics, isn't it? Anyway, their friendship was written really well. Of course Sirius would give James crap about wanting to give a girl a flower, but when it comes down to it, they're friends and help each other out.

And I absolutely love the last line! It's perfect and fits the chapter so well :) On to the next!

Author's Response: Yet again, I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter (I am getting really repetitive with responses but oh well...)

And yes, Prof. Sprout is such a nice woman. :)) But that doesn't mean that she will give James free passes. ;)

Yes, this pun is really terribly overused. I still felt the need to include it though (in a bit of sarcastic manner). And the friendship between James and Sirius - I imagine it being the standard strong male bonding - they tease each other but always got each other's backs. :)


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