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Review:Singularity says:
This was really unique. I love the way that you are tying in the flowers to the plot line. It doesn't feel forced at all. I also really love the way you are characterizing James. I've never liked him (I know...boo hiss...) because he always seemed like such a jerk in the books, so it's really nice to see a bit of his 'softer side'.

Also, the whole idea about James wanting to be great at Transfiguration so he'll be able to help his friend is awesome and I love the ending lines about Lily pushing him to be better. Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Ohh, I am happy that you don't feel the flowers forced. That's probably what required most thinking on my part - the situations that James and Lily are in so that it feels natural. And of course vary them - since if he just plainly "gives" her the flower every year, it would be boring and repetitive.

And you know - there was a time a didn't like James at all - I even thought that Snape was more deserving of Lily's love. But he was just a growing boy and I know obnoxious ones that have grown into fine men. And James certainly falls in that category. :)


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