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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hello!

Firstly, thank you for participating in my challenge, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Secondly, wow… this is definitely a completely different and original way at linking and Oliver/OC ship to Valentine's Day. Really clever, really well written, and the descriptions you used, the metaphors that linked to Valentine's Day.. really gave me a strong sense of Oliver and the OC.

The plot is so simple, but you wrote it wonderfully. Making Oliver like Cupid.. so clever, really. I can't say that enough! And your description is so creative.. "I watched Cupid pull out another arrow. He carefully crafted it, lacing it with flattery and lingering stares." Really gets the point across. Each line, each sentence is powerful. You make me understand what this OC's sister is thinking and feeling.

Characters, wonderful. I always love Oliver/OC, and though this is not what I expected, I completely enjoyed it even more so! What I really love about this is simply the writing, the idea of it. Oliver as cupid is so brilliant, so original. I really enjoyed reading it!

Once again, thanks for participating in my challenge! I only have 2 entries so far, but I can tell already that it'll be hard to pick, but you stand a very good chance, because I loved this! :)

- maskedmuggle / Charlotte :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked Charlotte. It was a thought that actually began to bug me until I wrote it down.

It took a few tries and edits to get Oliver as cupid just right in my mind but I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. It was a fresh perspective in my mind!

Thanks for the AWESOME challenge!

--Lindsey


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