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Review:Singularity says:
I've been a big fan of your Children's Crusade Universe for awhile. This is very different, but I enjoyed it just as much...in a completely different way, of course :)

It's such a fun story. The whole scene with the pygmy puffs was my favorite part. It was just absolutely hilarious. I loved when Ron, Harry, and Kingsley were having their 'serious' conversation, but the pygmy puffs kept dancing around. So funny!

The conversation between Harry and Ron just seemed so natural. You captured their characters brilliantly. I can completely see the two of them sitting around, drinking firewhiskey, commiserating on how buggered they are, but not doing anything about it. They really are clueless about women.

Molly was perfect as well, with her sweeping in and saving her boys. Lecturing them about women while making them dinner. Completely something I could see happening!

And Umbridge as the villain was great. It's nice to see her finally get what she has coming. Here's to hoping that she winds up in a nice cell in Azkaban once the girls are done with her!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for dropping by. Flattered you enjoyed the Crusadiverse and thanks for this great review.

I'll let you in on a little secret. Although this tale takes place elsewhere from the Crusadiverse, it was kind of the "template" for the version of Harry and Ron that I later ended up writing in Crusade and its prequels. You see, I wrote Gordon shortly after I finished Clocks. I wanted to do somthing light and funny after the three alarm fire that was Clocks. But, I wasn't sure how to capture Harry's voice, or his relationship with Ron. With a little help from Sting, it just kind of worked itself out. The result was almost a "buddy cop" relationship that I was able to whip up into what became the Crusadiverse.

This tale is my kind of silly; I'm really glad you got a kick out of it. The idea of the boys being completely clueless (a theme that plays out in Proposal, as well) was a lot of fun to write. And Molly to the rescue was one of my all time favorite moments. Really glad you liked it.

Umbridge! Ugh! I'm glad you liked her meeting justice, but, honestly, I really want to write a story where she REALLY gets what's coming to her. Well, someday...

Thanks again

Eldy

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