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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
wow i liked it! you did a great job describing the place and the situation. and the whole game between draco and hermione was perfect because they are both really competitive and neither wanting to back down and be the loser. i thought it would have been funny in the end if one of them would have fallen asleep on the other while they were kissing or something but it was just perfect the way you ended it as well. although since i have never had alcohol im not sure if hermione would think about how she isnt acting like herself.. maybe people really do think that they normally wouldnt do something if they didnt have the alcohol in their system.

anywho like i said you did a great job. i liked the description and the whole "game" you had between draco and hermione.
~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)

I'm glad you liked it! Yeah that's exactly why I chose to create a little game between them because it wouldn't have worked if they just started doing all that as though they were in love with each other. With them both being really stubborn it made it easy for me to write about them not backing down.

Haha yes one of them falling asleep would be seriously funny!

About the alcohol thing. . . Hermione drank a large amount of firewhiskey, probably more than enough to get her drunk. In my head the reason she even considered following the mysterious sound in the first place is becasue she was already past the point of thinking about what she was doing clearly. Then she went and consumed even more alcohol so I decided that her conscience would have pretty much disappeard by that point. Plus if she'd have though about anything other than the game she probably would have just broke down about Ron and I didn't want that! Haha


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