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Review:angeless7fallenstarsong says:
Hey! :) This is Ange from the forums. I'd like to start by thanking you for your entry and telling you how wonderful it is. :)

As always, I'm going to take the OCD road and comment on the spacing. I'd suggest you use the simple editor (it doesn't mess up the spaces) to go and even it out. You can submit edits to a chapter while you put a new chapter in the queue! :)

Awww, I like Ernie from the first paragraph. This version of him definitely fits in with the canon. I think you mean "narcissistic" instead of "narcissus," though.

I love the idea of the first years "finding out where they belong" and of Ernie being unhappy with the discovery.

The paragraph that begins with "Hannah Abott came to be..." is. Brilliant. (Although Weird Sisters should probably be capitalized.) I love Hannah as you've described her. :) And the paragraph after that is cute, too. It's funny how sometimes you just can't help but love the strangest people.

Awww, he goes to find her. :) Cute.

In the paragraph that begins with "In Ernie's hastened pace..." you've misspelled "Lumos."

Ahhh :) I completely and totally loved it. Thanks again for submitting!

Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked the story!

Read your review and of course I immediately skipped off to edit the chapter :) thank you so much for the suggestion of using simple editor.

I found Ernies character quite quickly and I always try to follow cannon because it is much more pleasant to read. I have always imagined him a bit stuck-up and trying to be better than everyone else...

Had to have Hannah in it to show him what is right... I am so happy that you liked the way I described her! it's a bit different to how I usually describe people but I love discriptions of characters that are like that.

Thank You so much for liking the story and Thank You so so so much for making it a favourite. Made my day :)


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