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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Wow! If I was wearing socks, they would for sure be knocked off right about now. I'm a sucker for a good romantic story. And boy, did you deliver!

I love seeing this different side of Hermione, rather than the bossy goody-two-shoes we all know (and, admittedly, love). And the way you describe her emotions and her kiss with Draco was so detailed I found myself just a wee bit short of breath, too!

My only concern is that in a few places some commas are left out - minor little punctuation errors, things like that. But that kind of thing just pops out at me, it's not all that noticeable.

You should keep on writing, you have a gift!

Author's Response: Ahh glad you liked it, that would be the general effect I wanted the story to have. It wasn't meant to get that steamy at first but I kinda got carried away *looks sheepish*

Yeah punctuation has never been a friend of mine (pretty bad considering I'm both an english and creative writing student) Plus I was so excited that I had a story to post on here proof reading wasn't a high priority.

Well thank you for your kind words, I shall continue with my gift :D


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