That was SO good, dear friend!
Oh, apologies! Where are my manners? How was your Christmas and I hope you had a good start to the New Year?
Back to this enthrally and enchanting little one shot. It was a brilliant and original idea to shadow Wham's Last Christmas video. I love that song- it always reminds me of Christmas. Unfortunately, I can relate to the song and Draco, so I think you've nailed the emotions felt down to a tee. Well done!
I'm glad you included the flashback- it makes more sense to your audience to know what went on so they can empathise with his pain, more, because they know that what happened wasn't a one-off to Draco. It meant something to him.
The corridor scene was a good way to end- very gracious of Draco, but at the same time, Hermione felt guilty. And so she should've! I'm with Draco on this one, of course. It was rather rude of her to leave him abruptly like that...
Anyway! A very superb job, my friend. I hope that you are keeping well. I'm extremely bored waiting for school to start up again. I've taken to re-reading Twilight's Eclipse and now onto Breaking Dawn. Glee also comes back for Season 2 next week for us, so my boredom will not be prolonged for much longer, thankfully.
I hope you are well and that you had a good Christmas. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Author's Response: My Dear MizzWeasley,
your words made me feel so good... A real good start of the year :) And you always make me smile, too :)
Thank You, my Christmas went well, the usual shopping spree, gift wrapping in a rush, cooking and baking and of course eating... And the sense of guilt you shouldn't have eaten the last 6 pieces of cookies... Crazy.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this song-fic (my first and maybe last one), I was afraid readers wouldn't like it without a happy ending... I love that music video and I think my story makes sense only if you have seen that. I love that Xmas atmosphere :)
I hope you are fine, too, and enjoyed both Xmas and New Year's Eve...
You know, I feel so guilty for not reviewing your chapters but I don't have that much time... I like reading your words carefully, making notes during reading, to be able to write a detailed review... But I don't have time to do that, my dear friend, I hope you can forgive me. I would like to tell you more about myself but it is not a chatroom...
I watched Glee Season 1 (it arrived in my country finally) because of you and I loved it :)
I hope you won't be bored for long... At least, not by my lines...
Btw, I'm on the-dark-arts (you know, where you can ask for banners), you can find me there (my penname is the same there) and it is possible to text each other there.
Happy New Year, my dear friend!