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Review:XharrysdarlingX says:
Another great chapter. I loved it. Another thing I like is the animosity between Sirius and Snape, I often read stories where the dislike and bullying seems a bit over the top, we know they bullied Snape but not to hex and curse him every time they saw him, it was more of a humiliation ritual, which I feel you're emphasising with the Vampire Hunter bat, I would image that would be something that the boys would do to poor Snape. & Snape is a very sneaky character & quite smart enough to take on one maurander at a time as you have shown in this chapter rather than have himself outnumbered.

You built the mystery around Michelle some more in this chapter & i'm looking forward to finding out more about her and seeing the boys & i'm guessing Snape will end up dragged along for the ride lol, find out more about her too.

Author's Response: I see you caught the exact point on which I intend to base the story: Snape and the Marauders are really cunning enemies, who build their animosity on psychological ground rather than just stupid, rude pranks. Let the latter be Peeves playground.
As you very well noticed, they want to humiliate each other, rather than to cause physical pain. For me this revelation came when I read how furious James was, when Sirius put Snape in real danger, and how much Sirius regretted it, as well.
So in this story I want to build up this unique air of mutual animosity AND a sudden and unwanted dependence, which will slowly appear as the girl's role gets clearer in this thriller. I hope you will enjoy it! Thank you for your wonderful review!
wings


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