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Review:XharrysdarlingX says:
Hi there, I'm back to read your wonderful stories now that you're working on a non HG/DM agian lol. ( u know how much I hate that pairing lol)

First chapter was brilliant as usual, you really drew me into the story and I'm excited to see what happens next.

I doubt you meant to do it, but the character of Sirius really reminded me of the Just William character created by Ricard Compton, there were such similiarites and it's just the way I would picture Sirius rather than the sex-god I usually find him portrayed as.

I also loved the relationship & dynamics between the four friends, a lot of stories tend to leave Wormtail out or portray him as a bad or stupid character or have a Draco & Crabbe/ Goyle dynamic between him and the others which goes against everything we know of the four friends when they were at hogwarts.

On to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi, it's wonderful to see you back here, again!
I'm really glad that you are one of the few, who appreciate this story. I have to admit that it's far from perfect, needs some brushing up of grammar and so on, but I hope that the special atmosphere I tried to depict comes through!
I haven't thought of the Just William character, while writing the story, but now that you mention it - yes, there are some similarities. And to tell the truth, it doesn not make me feel bad at all. lol
Thank you for your precious review, dear XharrysdarlingX! Thank you!

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