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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:
OMG
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
I KNEWWW IT.

REMEMBER WHEN I SAID THAT IT COULD BE TEDDY? AND THAT ALL THE FACTS I LISTED OUT--OMG I KNEW IT! The only thing that was really throwing me off were your descriptions of Teddy's grief. Goodness, talk about an excellent actor.

And UGH, TEDDY IS SICK. SOOO SICK. EUGH. That is just. OMG. EW. I'm sorry to say that I didn't have faith in James the entire time. But UGH, OH GOD. Teddy -- his character is absolutely despicable. I hope James is still alive! Poor guy! D:

Holy guacamole, Melissa. You sure know how to pack a punch. This was absolutely brilliant. The plot was terrifyingly awesome, and the flow of the story was amazing. Your characterizations were perfectly complex and this had to be the most thrilling mystery I've read on HPFF. Of any fanfic, really. Not many people can write something like this, you know. Not even published authors. Everything you've written is so real - I could see it happening in front of my eyes, you know? I swear, my heart's pounding so fast right now - you've taken me along the ride in this story, this rollercoaster ride, and I'm just getting off. That rush of adrenaline is still there. And you know what? I don't think I've ever felt this way reading a story before. You. Are. Brilliant. Really, you are.

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FOLLOW-UP. When are you getting that written?

AFKLDS:FJEWJFDK:JWIEPJF:X:JFIFHDS :OMG TEDDY. JFDEWO:JXZEWPJLQEOH(*WERDJXZM.

WAH MY HEART IS CRYING FOR JAMES.
I'M SORRY.


--jordan :P

Author's Response: Lol. :) I'm starting to rewrite the sequel today. I'm sure it won't garner as much attention as this first one did, but hopefully some old readers come back to it.

Thank you times a gazillion for everything.


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