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Review:The Madness of Asura says:
Is this the last chapter, then? Sorry, your Author's comment at the beginning could have been either way, and the story's status is still WIP...

As a reader, I felt that you went through each stage of her "life" very naturally. I was actually spellbound by Capella and Severus's relationship. Severus has always been one of my favorites, and you made Capella an original character that I could actually like. Most of the time I hate original characters.

I also feel like you made Snape's character very well. This was an excellent story! Thank you for writing it!

Author's Response: No, this isn't the end yet. I think there's about 2-3 more left. Not entirely sure, it just depends on how I want the ending to go. Sorry I was a little cryptic about that. Its still WIP!

Thank you so much. I was worried that maybe I sped through the year at Hogwarts or that Capella was too wishy washy about it. Or that the whole thing with Snape happened too fast. It was hard to fully explain that she didn't love him but wanted the companionship. It was so complicated, I wasn't sure if I got it right.

I'm glad that you didn't think the whole Snape/OC thing was too kitschy. I'm usually not a huge fan of reading OCs either...I just write them. But when you think about it, there's nothing really all that original to Capella. She could have been any Slytherin girl. I didn't create her to be different, I created her to be normal.

And that's how Capella ties in so well. Since she's so under the radar, its entirely believable. I didn't want this to be AU, or for her to have changed Snape. She was just kind of there when he went through life, never actually helping him or "saving" him or whatever. He could have had a friend like her.

I'm glad that you, as a big Snape fan, find him to be up to your standards. I always worry that maybe its not right or its too out of character. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!


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