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Review:The Madness of Asura says:
True, I haven't read the next chapter, but-I-still-need-to-review!

Firstly, this made me giggle in real life:
"...I realized that we were no longer in the Great Hall. Instead, we were in an empty Slytherin common room and I had been halfway up the staircase to the boys dorms, automatically following Severus."

Secondly, I LOVE SEVERUS, and I'm glad they did something about this love of Severus that I have, and they, as characters, definitely had to do something about my love.

Thirdly, I'd like to compliment your "depth", I guess. You seem to understand humans a lot better than most do, and better than I do, I admit. I noticed some new things 'cause of you.

Happy New Year! It's been 18 minutes of 2011 for me... And I was reading your story to celebrate. ;]

Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for reading my story. I know the pairing isn't necessarily popular and I was taking a risk with writing it. Its not as successful as I would have liked, but the readers I have seem to understand the plot pretty well.

You know, Severus has never been one of my favorite characters. But this idea popped into my head one day and I couldn't let go of it. This was the perfect kind of relationship for Severus to have with someone. He is essentially a good guy, just misled (sp?). And when I came up with Capella...well, I had to know she wasn't exactly likeable. But her personality was just so intriguing, I had to keep going.

The whole "depth" of my insight on humans is easy to explain. I've got an anxiety disorder which makes me hypersensitive to people, I have to know what people are doing at all times. I usually stay quiet and just watch people and how they act. I swear, its not as creepy as it sounds. But it does help when it comes to writing. I understand people moreso than I do myself lol.

I'm so glad that you spent your New Year reading my story! You have no idea how happy I am to have a review like this. Thank you so much for reading and writing to me!


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