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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
I liked it. :) Remus is one of my favourite characters and Remus/Tonks is one of my favourite pairings. I think you did Remus' character justice with the conflicting emotions he is feeling and would probably always have felt occasionally. At times, especially in the beginning with Remus and Tonks I wished for a bit more of the conflict in his emotions but you brought in some of that later. What I mean is, not just saying that he loved her but was afraid for what he could do to her, but showing a bit more of how he really wanted to be with her maybe almost giving in to the temptation at times and then again his feelings about how he sees himself as dangerous. But as I said some of that you showed later on even though I was left wishing for a little more in the beginning just before the first flashback. What you could have done though a bit more of was showing how or why he loved Tonks instead of only saying that he loved her.

I think you did a very good job with the memories. Although I think that especially with what happened in Harry's third year, he had reason to be afraid, this still shows exactly what he was afraid of. At the same time this shows more of why people would have been afraid of werewolves who were otherwise nice and good people. Even if they wanted to be nice to someone like Remus, many would be afraid of mistakes that could happen and then wouldn't give him a job or something. I can also see that Remus might have tried more to be normal when he was younger and would have more easily convinced himself that he could live like anybody else then, until something happened.

As a side note, the temptation quote is one of my favourite quotes. :) As a whole you did a good job with this story!

Author's Response: Hello :)

Awh, thank you very much! I think you bring up a very good point. I will definitely look at that, I never really thought about WHY Remus loves Tonks..hmm.. so thank you for telling me about that!

Thank you about the memories. I thought the flashbacks might not make a lot of sense, so I'm glad everyone seems to understand the story and the attempt to explain Remus' feelings.

Once again, thank you very much for reading, and for the nice review! :)

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