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Review:Margravine says:
You show the friendship between the girls really well, and if the pace is a little slow, that's normal for a first chapter! I think you could work on making your dialogue more natural, but you've really painted a fleshed out picture of Hogwarts and established a 'feel' of school, which can be quite tricky!

Author's Response: Yes, I do tend to start first chapters off slow, but hopefully it will all pick up in the next chapter or so... I hope. And thanks again for the positive critique with how I'm setting the scene for what is to come next. :)

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