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Review:justonemorefic says:
AHHH I love this. This is so quietly sad. It's the tracing on the window. That really got to me. It's such an innocent thing to do, but it carries so much of her hopes and dreams. And the passage of time, I really liked how you described all the other mail that arrived.

(Nitpicky, but one of the first things that I noticed was this line "At a roughly hewn table in the kitchen sat a girl.", and it sort of threw off the flow I think because of how it's phrased and how it gets its own line)

But I really really like this. It's more than the stigma of being a squib, something that isn't perhaps entirely apparent to an eleven-year-old; it's about her dreams and not being able to get the one thing she wanted more than ever.

Author's Response: Thank you! Whenever I come back to this fic and think about Arabella's situation it makes me sad all over again, and I'm glad I've managed to portray some of that through my writing. It was really important to make the disappointment she felt real, so I'm glad I pulled it off. Thanks for the review!

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