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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi kaileena_sands

I'm here for the snowball fight; hopefully I won't get sniped midway through this review. At first I was tempted to read you Lily/James story, but spotting that this little One-Shot was based around the one and only Sirius Black made me change my mind. Now I will be honest, stories based around the marauders era more often than not dissapoint me because people just can't seem to write them properly. I have to say though, this particular One-Shot kept me laughing throughout, and I think you characterized the marauders very well indeed. One particular line that had me in stitches was:

"...it was an immutable fact of life that James could bring Lily to hysterical anger by simply sitting quietly in the next room..."

Poor James.

Sirius's voice came across to me as quite sarcastic, which I really liked. Not many people choose to characterize him in this way, but I personally liked it because it added a touch of originality and also it was realistic, because we all know Sirius was a very intelligent bloke.

There were some small typing errors here and there, but nothing too major that I could spot.

Overall a very 'clawesome enjoyable read. -Lol at my stupid unfunny joke.

Katie

Author's Response: Katie, I am happy that you found this funny even though the Marauders are not your usual cup of tea. :)))

And yes, Sirius for me is a bit sarcastic in his youth or at least likes to joke around a lot xD I think we can safely assume that he was quite intelligent indeed.

For the errors - yes, it's full of them even though I checked it so many times (fail :D) After the queue reopens, I am definitely editing it ;)

And clawesome sounds... clawesome - I quite like it :DD


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