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Review:miss_aurora says:
What I find really interesting about this story is Del's unique trait. However, it confuses me at the same time as I don't get the meaning of being a natural animagi because I thought being an animagi is something you have to work on and unless you have the talent you won't be one or something, so maybe, just at least for me, could you explain it?

Oh but anyway, great idea. This is for a challenge, I suppose? I especially like the last part where Del accidentally transformed and almost assaulted others (based on her inner thought) but at the end she actually act more like a tiger, a cute one even.However once again, I couldn't find the connection between the summary and this story. Actually, it's more like the third sentence of your summary. It sort-of implied something about this one-shot will tell us about the story of how Del eventually hates cinnamon or something along the line instead of showing that Del already hates cinnamon. Once again, that's just a thought.

Oh and James, I just love your foolishness sometimes.

Thank you for writing again! :D

~Go

Author's Response: For this story, I really needed Del to be an animagi but considering she's a third year it would be extremely difficult for her to register and learn, so that was the only way she would have this ability. Think of her animagus skill like Remus's lyncanthropy(sp?). And yes this was for a challenge. I should say that I fail at writing summaries so that is why there isn't a very good connection between the story and summary. Yes, James is often very foolish :)
And thanks for reviewing.

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