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Review:Ravenclaw333 says:
What a fantastic story! The imagery throughout was stunning and painted a vivid picture of the scene. The characterisation of all the characters was fantastic, and the relationship between Andromeda and Sirius was particularly well done; her being the older sister figure, and the tension between them and Bellatrix was good, effectively foreshadowing the events that we know happen in the books. Though in third person, you've done a good job of the child's perspective which I know can be difficult to pull off. Incredibly well written, 10/10.

Author's Response: Hello! This one shot strained my descriptive talents immensely, because I do not really consider description to be a strength of mine. I'm glad you liked the imagery and didn't think it was too much of a stretch!

While writing this, all I really had to go on for Andromeda and Sirius was that he once mentioned to Harry that she was his favorite cousin. I basically strung their relationship together on my idea of what a great older cousin would be like, if I were Sirius's age. As for Bellatrix, I had only my imagination to lead me on that. I don't have the misfortune of being sister to someone like her.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review this! Happy holidays!


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