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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi longlivelunabellatrix

Wow, you have no idea how strange it is to read something that depicts characters such as Bellatrix Lestrange as Children; it just isn;t something that I'm particularly used to seeing. very insightful; I like how her character maintains all of these mean qualities that don't quite stretch to the extremes of the adult Bellatrix; good characterisation of her - which is not something I am often accustomed to saying.

The storyline in general was very good, simple, but you managed to depict realistically how you would expect the Black family to be.

Your writing I have to say is quite brilliant. I love to read something that doesn't have any gramatical flaws and flows as well as this!

Overall a very well written piece which I thoroughly enjoyed reading.

Katie

Author's Response: Hi there! I'm glad you liked Bellatrix's characterization, as she's my favorite character and I've made it a personal goal of sorts to write her as well as possible. You nailed it on the head when you said she has similar qualities to those of her future self, but not as extreme. It took her time to grow into the evil character we know, but she still must have had signs of them as a kid, and that was what I was aiming for.

Thank you for the lovely review! Happy holidays!

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