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Review:LilyFire says:
First, I'd like to say Merry Christmas, Puff.
I think this, while sad, is a beautiful story. Showing Hugo's pain at the loss of his sister, and having Charlie somehow help him see that just because the memories are painful it doesn't mean they're bad, and the conclusion Hugo comes to at the end are all wonderfully constructed. You honestly had me tear up a bit, and that's not easily done while reading.
My favourite line, though it is sad too, is "She had wilted like the flower that shared her name." I don't know why, but I thought you would like to know that. I think the best part was how you were able to add just a touch of humor there at the end, with the line about a Rose Weasley glare.
You've written this really well. I did get confused at one point, though. How did Rose get poisoned? I mean, from what I can tell, it was from a dragon, but I just wasn't quite sure. Wonderful job(:
Happy Christmas!
~LilyFire

Author's Response: While crying is not always a good thing I'm so glad that my story inspired such a reaction so thank you for telling me that :)
I actually got a bit emotional writing this, especially because Rose is my favourite NextGen character and I killed her off?? Not sure where my mind was!
I really like that line too and I'm so happy you liked the bit at the end because I was worried people would think it didn't fit :)
I never really meant to imply how Rose got poisoned. I kind of just wanted to leave it up to the reader to decide for themselves. Personally I had a half-imagined idea that on her travels for a story for the paper she encountered a rare and deadly plant and thats how. But honestly I want people to form an idea themselves! :)
Thanks again! :D
- Galawen xx


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