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Review:LilyFire says:
Galawen! Merry Christmas!
So, at the beginning, I wasn't entirely sure that I would like it. I mean, I was intrigued, and wanted to figure out what was happening, but it just seemed…off. I know that's not much help but that's the only way I can describe it. But it goes away around the time she spends her week with Remus, and I have fallen in love with this story.
I love Willow, and she's always presented herself as a strong, well thought out character. Watching her transform from the apathetic girl to someone who cares and, what's more, wants to care. She's letting people in, becoming friends, and cares. (Yeah, I know, I said that, but it seems to be a major thing).
At first it seemed that you were leaving out Peter, or forgetting him, but that changed. He does seem to be important.
Now the only thing I'm worried about is the future. If you stick with canon, then in just a few short years Willow is going to be losing all of her friends (except maybe Remus). Unless she dies first, of course. But now I need to know what happens next. I'm excited for the next update. So, please hurry.
Again, Merry Christmas, fellow Puff. I hope you have a fantastic holiday.
~LilyFire

Author's Response: Hello! :)
I'm glad it grew on you eventually, the reason you may have felt that way might be because for a few of the beginning chapters I actually hadn't a clue where I was going with this story. I knew a basic outline but individual chapters were being written straight from my imagination without any planning :O
I love Willow myself :D Originally I was planning this to be a more Sirius-orientated story but when I started writing her I just couldn't stop! Her capacity for caring is one of the defining things about her I think and is the main reason she has such trouble letting them in at the start; she knows she'll care too much eventually.
Peter is the character I find the most difficult to write out of the entire series. I've said it before but trying to see past the betrayal and the person he became to the boy he must have been is a serious challenge for me and I'm trying very hard to not leave him out :)
Lol and I'm afraid I can't tell you about the future just yet =P But sure stick around and you'll find out I guess!
Thank you for these LOVELY presents, I'm gonna go answer the rest of them now. I love reviews! :D :D
- Galawen xx


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