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Review:spangles says:
Oh my gosh, you totally captured the an essence of like...sad beauty in this piece. It was so well written and I loved the way you wrote it, without dialogue and without lots of thoughts that went on and on. It was more of a recollection and the way you had Rita come seemed very plausible and probably was what really happened.

I assume it was either Voldemort or a Death Eater that killed her and I never thought about the fact that Bathilda was probably killed, I just always thought Voldemort came to her house and she was all ready dead and no one had checkedon her. You way seems a lot more realistic though. XD

And the scene with Ariana was awfully beautfiully tragic. I loved it! The description was perfect and I could imagine the whole thing in my head. Great one shot I loved it! (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and sorry for not replying sooner (though I think I did:/)

That is exactly what I wanted to do and my gaol was to try and capture Bathilda as a person filled of regret and to show her side of the story.

I could not help myself and I simply had to give Arianna a spot in this one-shot, I had the very scene in my head when I first read the book actually. The sadness of her being all alone and no one to witness it but her family.

Makes me so happy that you liked my way of writing in this piece because it's my way of talking and telling a story.

Thank you so much!


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