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Review:spangles says:
Ohhh this fic seems really good! I like the plot line a lot it's very original! All of the writing seems to flow very nicely and I really liked the way you wrote about Allie finding herself in the Dark Arts, it was almost creepy but very good! Calling it "Deep" fit really nicely because most people don't realize what they're doing at first, yeah? And Tom being Head Boy and "Master" all fits very nicely!

Then after all that darkness you have a cute little conversation about France but it still ended with darkness. I can't wait to read what's next! :)

Author's Response: haha Thank you so much! It's my first fanfic so I was really nervous about posting it :)

I'm so glad that you think it's original, my muse came and dropped a little cute purple bunny off and I couldn't resist taking care of it;P

Yes I think deep describes any kind of magic but mainly the dark actually. I see it like the surface is what everyone is told, but there is so much more to it, that no one ever gets to know if they don't dive in and find out for themselves.

Thank you so much for the review! happy you liked it :)


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