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Review:Anon says:
I'm a long time reader, first time reviewer of this story (sorry, really should have done it sooner), but after finding what I'm assuming is an earlier version of this over at fictionalley, I felt compelled to review...
I have to say, your writing has HUGELY improved. Like, now it's, like, omg, AMAZING.
Everything flows, nothing seems cliche and you have obviously mastered the 'show not tell' rule. Well done! Looking forward to the new chapter.

Author's Response: Aw don't worry about it, I'm glad you're reviewing now :) I'm not quite sure what you mean about finding a version of this story on FictionAlley, this is definitely the first place I've ever posted this. If you wouldn't mind messaging me a link to whatever you're talking about, that would be really helpful. Anyways, thanks very much for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

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