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Review:Secret Santa says:
So I totally laughed at the part where Hugo's landlady accosts him for the rent. It was such a funny image.

I wasn't at all expected how this chapter began, with Hugo waking up with the waitress - but I did like that his reaction to it was in character. He just went "Wtf?" and got outta there as fast as he could.

So, Ron is kinda a total jerk, which makes me sad, but I promise I'll get over it. I was cracking up at his cryptic questioning about Hugo's love life. "Are the sails up?" Hahahahaha.

Hugo's internal monologue is so funny. My favorite line was, "I hope the broomstick stops working in Bosnia."

xoxo

Author's Response: Hehe, I don't know why but I imagine any future landladies of mine to be like that :P

As for Ron being a bit of a git, it's just on the surface, I promise. In later chapters the reader gets to see their relationship grow, so fear not!

I think my absolute favourite thing about writing this story is Hugo's internal monologue! The advantage of being British is that it's easy to keep the characters British too - I guaruntee that's what most people sound like here!

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