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Review:baletgir says:
This appears to be a WIP that is long forgotten, but I really think it deserves another chance. This is such a great start, and it’s only a prologue! I honestly am not much of an avid reader of Black Family/Voldy’s followers, but I did really enjoy this and I would be very tempted to continue reading if there were more chapters.

I love Narcissa, you make her somewhat niceness to Harry in DH plausible, but also make her a plausible Death Eater. You definitely showed her to be much different than BOTH of her sisters, I would say she is somewhere in between the two. Maybe she would have been even more like Andromeda if she hadn’t grown up in a Pureblood family. Whereas I believe Bellatrix would always be the same no matter what environment she was raised in.

I noticed that commas (,) were very scarce in the majority of this chapter. There were definitely a few places that needed them (almost desperately), and some others where they would have been a nice addition. Towards the end it seemed fine, so maybe the beginning just needs another read though?

As I began with, I really believe you could/should continue this! Don’t let only have 4 reviews get you down! I haven’t read them, but I’m sure at least 3 if not all 4 really liked this and probably want to read more. I know I enjoyed reading it!
Happy Holidays!
:)BaletGir

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