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Review:Father Christmas says:
He knows when you've been sleeping, he knows when you're awake ...

This cute little story is an absolute gem. The description is really stunning - vivid and clear to imagine exactly what the characters are doing and what the setting is like. I loved the line "splashes of blues, pinks, yellows and purples litter the lush green grass of the lawn" as an opening - it helps to create a really pretty and gentle atmosphere. The metaphors and similes are lovely too - I especially liked "You’re forever in orbit around each other, forever in motion with him" - it sounds eternal and as if nothing can stop the two.

The twist is really heartbreaking - I didn't see it coming in the slightest! Such a stark contrast from the first half, and as usual very well written. The story is perfectly told - I imagine the rehabilitation clinic to be a very quiet, charming place where Ariadne could be at peace.

A very lovely story!

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