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Review:celticbard says:
Hello Shiloh!
Wow. This is an extremely powerful piece. And, as usual, beautifully written. I think you did a fantastic job exploring such a difficult subject, one that most people find impossible to comprehend. I must admit, I cannot imagine losing a child. Molly's sorrow, her literal heartbreak, is very well portrayed throughout this piece. I think writers always run the risk of crossing the line into the melodramatic when they write stories revolving around a character's death, but this fic came across as mature, thoughtful and genuine.

I loved how Molly equates being a parent to having your heart outside yourself. It almost reminded me, in a rather strange way, of Voldemort's Horcruxes. By taking his soul out of his body, he truly perverted all that is good and loving, while Molly herself is the complete opposite. She is selfless and yet she mourns. She lives on her for her other children, and yet, a part of her will always be with Fred. And as you so aptly put it, the loss of a child inflicts a wound that will never heal.

This was an amazing piece, Shiloh. I got goosebumps while reading it. You are a very talented writer. I'm so glad I was able to read so much of your work. Merry Christmas!

Best,
celticbard

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