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Review:celticbard says:
Hey Shiloh!
This piece has so much of the perverted fairy tale in it, accompanied by a subtle layer of tension and desire. I really like what you've done with Narcissa here. She is almost unreachable in her perfection. Although I want to relate to her as a character, although I feel as though I should pity her, I really can't. She's raised herself above human emotion and the only thing that's left of her is that tiny trace of doubt, nearly imperceptible, but potent when recognized.

This was a lovely, poetic piece, Shiloh. I enjoyed every bit of it. The emphasis on perfection and purity had a creepy undertone to it, perfectly echoing the Pureblood fanaticism of Voldermort and his Death Eaters. Lucius was likewise well done and although I think he loves Narcissa, his expectations of her are chilling.

This was a great one-shot, Shiloh. Really wonderful writing.

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had fun writing this piece and I really tried to capture the way Narcissa would be feeling. Realizing, perhaps, what she's gotten herself into but the reality being that she chose this. She's made her bed and now she must lie in it.

Your reviews are so lovely :)
xoxo
Shiloh


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