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Review:celticbard says:
Wow! So Lorcan isn't just overly sensitive, he's delusion. At least, that's my take on things. He seems to have very unrealistic expectations of Lucy and clearly, he idolizes her. Unfortunately, I think his notion of her flawless nature is going to come crashing down. Right now, he has her on a pedestal and if their relationship is ever going to work, he is going to have to realize that she isn't perfect.

I liked the fact that Lysander was the more grounded of the twins. He was able to give Lorcan the proverbial smack upside the head he needed.

As for Lucy, I can't wait to see more of her character. She really seems like an interesting young woman and I'm curious as to just why she followed Lorcan into the field of International diplomacy. It makes me think that he might have had a greater influence on her than she initially lets on.

This was another well-written chapter, Shiloh, a few typos here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed with a quick once-over. Please do update soon! I'm eager to see just what Lorcan has in mind now that his brother has set him straight. Until then, take care!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Haha, delusional. That's good. I like that. He is, a bit. He over-romanticizes everything and it almost ruins things for him. Without Lysander's advice I don't know that he would ever have gotten his act together.
The scene between the brothers was my favorite to write, definitely. Lysander was the typical wild-child and now he's the one who has to give the situation perspective. I love how grown up he is and how he guides his rather ridiculous brother to a realistic conclusion.

Lucy is so practical and adorable. She's the perfect fit for Lorcan, really.

xoxo
Shiloh


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