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Review:celticbard says:
Hi Shiloh!
Haha, I certainly know how you feel about starting a new WIP, I'm the same way myself. However, I must say, I think this story is well worth the effort. I really like this opening chapter. Lorcan seems like such a sensitive young man and yet, there is something cavalier in him, just in the way he says "Hey Lucy".

I also loved how the first scene kept making references to loss, the loss her scent, the loss of the feel of her hair on his skin. All those little foreshadowing elements really paid off when it came to the second scene. No wonder why Lorcan is experiencing a sense of loss, the love of his life is with another man!

And although there is an undercurrent of angst in this chapter, the emotion wasn't entirely overwhelming, which I think works well for this type of fic.

Needless to say, I'm glad I read this. The writing was strong and quite enjoyable. Great job!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so happy to hear when someone likes a new project.

I'm so glad you liked the first chapter. I started writing this as a one-shot and then Lorcan came along and demanded I let him get the girl, so it became a short story :) I'm fond of this piece and I am so glad you like it.

Thank you for the review!
xoxo
Shiloh


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